Friday, October 3, 2008

Revise Project--1

Revise elements:

First I need to start out by adding more describtion on who I am talking about, and what the major topic is.

Second fully develop sentances in more broad detail and more descriptive parapgraphs

And lastly I need to figure out what exactly I learned from all of it. What I truely got out of my experience.

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